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WRITERS' Journal

Table of Contents
May/June 2007
Volume 28, Number 3

 

      .....Editor's Note, by Leon Ogroske 

Christina Hamlett was able to get an interview for us with director Kevin Macdonald of the award winning The Last King of Scotland movie. Read this revealing column on page 8.

We have some good information for marketing your writing in this issue. You may be surprised at the work available to you if people only knew about your skills. Sonya Carmichael Jones will explain how writers can market themselves in her "Get Customers, Get Sales" article on page 41.

On page 46, Patricia L. Fry tells how regional magazines are treasure-troves for writers. It seems as though regional magazines spring up frequently. Some are short-lived, while others are as old as the cities from which they reign. Don’t pass up this lucrative market for your writing.

Sometimes it is difficult to put yourself in the minds of young readers and know what will make them eager to read on. You need to create suspense. Suzanna E. Henshon, on page 56, offers a few ideas on how you might accomplish this in your writing.

Do you need a killer as a character in your story? If you find it hard to come up with a believable murderer, Evelyn M. Seranne, on page 48 has just the formula.

While editing this publication we came across some very interesting writers’ errors. Test yourself with our quiz on page 42.

You don’t have to travel thousands of miles in order to write a travel article; you can write about local events and places. Most people don’t travel overseas. Some of you may not even travel out of your home state. Remember the old adage: write what you know. Write about local places of interest that you think readers may like to visit. Your chance of being recognized in our Travel Writing contest is good because the number of contest entries has been rather low. Give travel writing a try. You may be amazed at how easy it is to tell others about a backyard getaway.

If you do travel this summer, jot down some notes you can use to create that winning travel article or story. Are you going camping? Tell other campers about your newfound remote campsite. Are you the sightseeing type? Where did you go? What did you see? Write up a description about your destination, give it your best writer’s flair, and enter it in the 2007 Travel Writing contest. Then take that same piece and submit it to one of your regional publications. Readers are always eager to learn of new and interesting places to visit.

Leon Ogroske, editor

 

Columns

  4       .....Readers' P.O.V.

  5       .....Massaging the Muse, Lynne Pisano
           Three's Company

  6       .....Marketing Helps, Janet Elaine Smith
           Bring Your Characters to Life

  7       .....Vocabulary Review, Carolyn Howard-Johnson
           Decks

  8       .....Effective Screenwriting, by Christina Hamlett
           Through a Lens Darkly: From "Real" to "Reel" with The Last King of Scotland
           
"No man chooses evil because it is evil; he only mistakes it for happiness, the good he seeks."—Mary Wollstonecraft. Though she didn't live to see her namesake daughter write Frankenstein, Wollstonecraft's quote lends itself well to this month's spotlight on the soul of a villain and the consequences that transpire when monstrous ambition gets out of hand....

 11      .....Photography Techniques, by Ronald D. Kness
           Shooting Marketable Travel Photos
           
Today we are going to look at some tools and techniques that, when used, will considerably improve your travel photos. Marketable travel photos aren't necessarily the product of which type of camera you use or how expensive it might have been, since many of the point-and-shoot cameras take very good images. It is more about how you compose the image than anything else....

 56      .....For Beginners Only, by Suzanna E. Henshon
           What Happens Next? Suspense in Children's Fiction 
           
Ask children why they like a book, and they'll probably say they couldn't stop reading it. The story line drew them in, and they brought it to soccer practice and homeroom class. They neglected their homework because they had to find out what happened to Harry Potter in Harry Potter and the Half-Blood Prince (2005)....

 57      .....Words...Tools of Our Trade, by Betty Garton Ulrich
           Brevity Is the Soul of Wit—and of Good Writing
          
One flaw that often besets beginning (and often more advanced) writers is that of verbosity: too many words!....

 61       .....WRITERS' Journal Market Report, by Laurie Graziano
            May/June 2007 Market Report And, Heather Ray of n good health
           
The n media group provides a wide array of specialty magazines for interested readers and writers. Many of the titles are theme-related and focus on the southwest Florida area. This part of the state includes many of the sixty-seven counties Floridians enjoy for both work and recereation....

                   Markets: n good health, nvestments, n magazine, Golfing Naples & Southwest Florida, Southern Boating, Betty & Veronica, Hobby Farms, Magical Blend, True West, Western Interiors & Design.

Feature Articles

 13       .....Writing-Management Systems, by Don Merrill
            Getting Organized
           
Writing is my passion. Management of that writing is not. I may be brimming with ideas for articles, but the organization of my writing, from inspiration to invoices, looks a lot like my sock drawer....

 16       .....Travel Writing Questions and Answers, by Susan Miles
            Practical Answers to Your Travel Writing Dilemmas
           
I am inspired to write this article to capture the wonderful questions on travel writing that have recently landed in my inbox. They have come from both aspiring amateurs and experienced professionals, covering many and varied aspects of this enticing nonfiction genre....

 20       .....Are You Writing Yourself to Injury?, by Aidan Lucid
            There's a Right Way to Write
           
You're hunched over the keyboard, typing furiously for one hour without any break. "Just one more line," you keep telling yourself; and then that one more line becomes one more paragraph and that, in turn, leads to one more page. Little do we realize, however, that we may be writing ourselves to a probable long-term injury....

 22       .....The Author-Agent Partnership, by Shutta Crum 
            A Comprehensive Checklist for Getting It Right
           
No one needs an agent to sell creative work. Even if you do have an agent, that does not ensure that your work will sell....

 41       .....Get Customers, Get Sales, by Sonya Carmichael Jones
            Marketing Tips for Enterprising Writers
           
When you depend on writing assignments for your livelihood, you can't entrust your career to job boards entirely. That's why there's marketing....

 42       .....Writers' Notebook
           Newspaper Jargon
           What We Found While Editing WJ

 43       .....Beckett's Inspiring Example, by Patrick J. Ziska 
            He Never Let Rejection Crush Him
           
He was penniless, rejected again and again by dozens of publishers, and nearly died when he was stabbed in the streets of Paris. He lost many of his closest friends to the Nazis during World War II. In 1932, he wrote his first novel, Dream of Fair to Middling Women,  Which was rejected scores of times by scores of publishers; he stopped sending it out. (It was finally published posthumously in 1992.) In 1933, He tried to publish his first book of poems and had no luck there, either....

 44       .....The Short-Shorties, by Isabel Joshlin Glaser
            Big Stuff in Poetry
           
Now and the, new shapes in poetry are dreamed into life by the fertile minds of today's poets. Perhaps because I write poetry for children as well as adults, I find the short forms especially appealing....

 46       .....Regional Magazines, by Patricia L. Fry
           Make Them Your Bread-and-Butter Market
           
Do you direct most of your queries to consumer magazines? Are you mainly focused on landing assignments for nationally circulated publications? If so, you might be overlooking a lucrative market existing right in your own backyard: consumer and trade regionals....

 48       .....The Mystery Writer's Crash Course, by Evelyn M. Seranne
            Creating a Convincing Killer
           
While your sleuth has the burden of unraveling the clues and solving the murder the person who commits the crime is the individual who activates your story and determines the direction of your plot. For your story to resonate with the reader, it's essential to provide your killer not only with opportunity and means, but also with the compulsions that drive him to such desperate measures....

Travel Writing Contest

 25        .....A Taste of Turin, by James Sajo
            First Prize Winner of November 2006 Travel Writing Contest

 28        .....A Crane Quest Behind the Scenes in China, by Laura L. Mays Hoopes
            Second Prize Winner of November 2006 Travel Writing Contest

 29        .....An Ancient Marvel—Newgrange, by James Sajo
            Third Prize Winner of November 2006 Travel Writing Contest

Fiction

 32        .....Aw, Rats!, by Laurel L. Burke
            Honorable Mention Winner of 2006 Horror/Ghost Contest

 36        .....Mirror, Mirror, by Allison Harris
            Honorable Mention Winner of 2006 Horror/Ghost Contest

December 20, 2006 Write to Win! Winner

 38        ....."Portrait of Julie"—"The paint wasn't even dry...," by Diane Meholick

Poetry

 51       .....Every Day With Poetry, by Esther M. Leiper
            "Repent, Repeat, Revise"
           
The preacher cries, "Repent," the teacher orders, "Repeat after me," while the poet is repeatedly advised to revise as in fine-tune, prune, work a piece over, cut the fat, choose the exact word, don't gush or use cliches, skip pretentious vocabulary, know where an idea is heading, reveal layers of meaning, and consider where to break lines and—or if—to place punctuation. Should one choose rhyme and meter? Such combined discipline requires a special skill and knowing pitfalls to avoid. Sometimes being a ditch digger or a sanitation engineer appears easier than squiggling away on paper! Even free verse has drawbacks, for it can sound like fractured prose with seesaw lines broken according to neither sound patterns nor logic. (Robert Benchley blandly remarked, "If free verse, why not free arithmetic?") No wonder writers get scared! It's hard enough to capture a clear thought without worrying about fancy stuff....

 55       .....Esther Comments On..., by Esther M. Leiper
            "Glass of Water"
            
It takes special skill to write a poem that flirts between being serious and humorous, and I was delighted when Travelli's poem "Glass of Water" greeted my gaze. The message he conveys is not funny in a laugh-aloud sense, yet details are vivid and clever and this serves to soften a rather didactic conclusion....

Photo Contest

December 2006 Photo Contest Winners

64        ....First Prize, "A Thirsty Blue Jay," by Susan Blevins
           
Susan specializes in country scene and nature photos as an amateur freelance stock photographer. After working for seven years as a Head Start aide and teacher she has decided to make her hobby of photography into a full-time career. She has had two photos published in Country Extra magazine and plans to attend college and pursue photojournalism.

            ....Second Prize, "Jessie's Fence," by Barb Rathbun

            ....Third Prize, "Sisters," by Shelly LeBlanc


 

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